Third Prince Elmer

Everything that I have read so far was good. There are not many chapters to make comments on the world building, but it looks promising. Author, if you are reading this, you better start writing more chapters or...

"Hello, Author-kun here! Thanks for reading my book, and your opinions and suggestions are always welcome. Do give it a try! I’d rate this book a 5 because, well, I’m shameless, but you can’t expect me to rate my own book any lower. I really hope you enjoy it and decide to stick around for more chapters!"

i am really enjoying this story , so far story is good and enjoyable...I like yandera type  but she is too extreme, well not that i hate it but prefer if her yandera mode is bit lower this story has good lore,good power level system and the elements, fighting techniques, meterials ..... all are very detailed and the  characters are good also i wouldv've prefer if her revenge part is just a small part of the story I mean the revenge with her/ his classmate..since there are gods and primordial existence and the some of  elements mentioned are all planetary + powers like void,chaos, time.... so hope this story goes beyond planet + level and with heros level limit their raw strength only goes continent level unless with good hax they go beyond continent level also i heard there will be Bl, well since now that he became she..it will be technically considered straight although it still bit strange since he was a male before well whatever since from reader perspective it's still between man and women so I'm alright with that part and you already has explained the reason for it anyway well that's it my review,I'm really hyped since this story has majority of the thing I liked  :)

wow I'm loving this book, will definitely continue

"Just punch him over and over, but don't you dare kill him, you will pay 10 times of the payment."

[Endurance] - 2

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

I smiled trying to calm her down